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Chapter One, Page Nine by heysawbones Chapter One, Page Nine by heysawbones
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BaneNascent Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional General Artist
They got married in one panel? I thought you were going to play out the drama with father and son and stretch it out more. Show the brides side of the family story, what her motives are and a glimpse of the secret plan behind it. I figured the end of the story arc would be the wedding with people grinding their teeth with disapproval and frustration. Maybe a person the bride tied up and hid to prevent them from exposing the truth that would ruin the union. And behind the scenes you would see more of the supporting cast. It might seem soap opera cliche but....yeah.

I'll admit it was a H.P. Lovecraft type story moment for me. "It was nice day, and they got married". 
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heysawbones Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional General Artist
Oh, son. Son.

You ain't even know the half of it.
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BaneNascent Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional General Artist
I will stay tuned. Same Sawbones time and same Sawbones channel!
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